Critique My New Poem: Sweet Love Turns Sour?
Sweet Love Turns Sour
Sweet Love
Now Became
Lemon sour
Bitter Bitter
Every hour
I tried hard
I played my cards
My luck was blank
I missed the track
My love is gone
I lost the fun
I packed my luggage
Rode the carriage
Looking for love
in new land
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